In Class: Freewrite

I feel pretty good about essay 2. However I probably need to go back and revise it regarding the grading rubric to make sure that I have included everything. I also am worried that I may have too many quotes in my essay. I don't want to take any out though because they are all very good quotes that really support my opinion on the topic. I plan on taking my essay to the writing center today to have it further revised, so hopefully doing this will help my grade on my next essay. I also am worried if I included enough narrative in my essay. There was so much I learned and researched that I didn't have much room to put my opinion in, although I did but very briefly. I also hope that I get a better grade on this essay than I did on my last because I spent more time on it and I enjoyed writing it more. I hope that the reader understands why I wrote about the essay and why it means so much to me, but I am worried that they may not because I am unsure if I have enough of that information.