In Class: Freewrite

Her controlling idea is how to get guys to claim hot chicks. She does this with the support of already made commercials that relate to this. The commercials relate to this, such as girls are attracted to certain smells. She uses laundry and mint commercials to emphasize this point. Her controlling idea was very understandable and easy to find with the help of the support from the commercials that related to this idea. She emphasized what guys would need to do to get a girls attention.